omg even though this is not done yet, this is turning out to be a real beauty.. sweeeettt

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Wow~ crazy number of layers there. XD
Can't wait to see your finished stuff. Keep it up.

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It actually doesn't have that many after merging layers. Too lazy to name each layer

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HOW MANY LAYERS!?!?!?! MY GOD!

唔喔喔喔喔！！！！！！！！！！！！！！
巨乳魔王終於要出個人彩本啦！！！＋口＋！！！！
這張胸部好棒阿（口水

Oh, this is really good! Lot of layers, though. :blink:
And she has no nipples

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lol if I draw the nipple my illustration book will be 18x. I don't mind doing so though
I still keep all these layers is because I keep changing colors, compositions, and etc. during drawing. When I'm tired of drawing over and over again I'll merge all the layers and do some final touch in Photoshop and Painter.

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Ohkay

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I think I see what you mean about the face. I think part of it is that the whole rest of the image is very flowing, and the face itself is a little too self-contained.

My recommendation would be some kind of tattoo or design that moves from her empty cheek to her neck, or even just moving some of that hair flowing over her ear forward a little, to shrink the empty space of her cheek. I did notice that while the rest of her hair has a curl to the bottom of it, as if she was moving her head forward and then jerked it backwards again, the hair in front of her ear acts in an opposite fashion. Also, adding light trails to the red orbs around her hands would increase the sense of motion, which makes the image seem more alive and active.

Another way you might try to modify the face would be to lower her gaze, so that it looks not at the viewer, but at her instrument, as if she was intent on her playing above all else. This could be done simply by shifting the iris of her eyes more towards the right, so that the white is only visible on the left side of her eye. Again, this works to add more energy to the piece.

Hope you find my critique useful and not overbearing!

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